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Trifextra Week 70: Worlds Collide

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Trifextra Week 70:

I saw the prompt and went, Yay! I have just the thing for this (sort of). This is a part of a much bigger poem, one that’s not quite finished as of yet (the lazy in me sends his love).

Anyway, here goes …

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Worlds Collide

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His life a normalcy, hers vibrancy,

Worlds collide

His eyes a distant-blue, hers crimson hue

Looks imply

His nervous smile, her vocal sigh,

Volumes said

His questioning eyes, her urgent smile,

Breaths entwine

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P.S. It may not look it but it is impossibly difficult to fill in the format of His__, Her__, two-word-punch-line.

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Author: Hamza

A college student of 18. With sarcasm as my voice and a proud disregard for rules, I'm looking to shake up the world a little - without sounding incredibly cheesy.

15 thoughts on “Trifextra Week 70: Worlds Collide

  1. Lovely! I really love the opening contrast of normalcy vs. vibrancy.

  2. “looks imply”… they do, don’t they? Nicely done – I appreciate the poetic contrasts.

  3. A great way to capture a moment. Nice job!

  4. Great poetry!

  5. If this is any indication, the rest of the poem must be a lovely piece of work. Hope to see it in its entirety one day!

    Thank you for linking up!

  6. wonderful poetry with wordplay internal rhymes and a great beat, love the content to…

  7. Lovely Hamza – really vivid. Love the colour in it too.

  8. I am dazed…wow

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